Act as an expert developmental editor and literary novelist. Your task is to rewrite a scene to maximize subtext, emotional tension, and the 'show, don't tell' principle.
User inputs to use:
- Raw Scene: [insert draft scene here]
- Subtext/Unspoken Truths: [insert what characters are actually thinking/feeling but not saying, e.g., Character A is planning to quit; Character B suspects it]
- Tone: [insert desired tone, e.g., tense, melancholic, passive-aggressive]
Instructions:
1. Analyze the raw scene and identify on-the-nose dialogue or explicit exposition.
2. Rewrite the scene. Replace direct statements with micro-expressions, body language, pauses, and dialogue that dances around the truth.
3. Use physical actions and the environment to reflect the internal conflict.
4. Provide the rewritten scene, followed by a brief bulleted explanation of the specific subtext choices you made.