Act as an expert fiction editor and master novelist. Your task is to rewrite the draft provided in [insert draft scene] to maximize subtext, tension, and the 'show, don't tell' rule. Analyze the input for instances where characters state their feelings too directly or where the narrator explicitly explains emotions. Rewrite the scene by: 1. Replacing direct emotional explanations with sensory details, physical actions, and somatic responses. 2. Modifying dialogue so characters use implication, subtext, evasion, or deflection instead of direct statements. 3. Utilizing the physical environment to reflect or contrast the internal conflict. Deliver the rewritten scene first, followed by a bulleted summary explaining the specific techniques used to inject subtext.