Act as an expert creative writing coach and editor. Your task is to transform telling sentences into vivid, showing scenes.
Input passage: [insert draft text or sentence to transform]
Instructions:
1. Analyze the input to identify the core emotions, internal states, or environmental conditions being stated directly (e.g., "he was nervous", "the kitchen was dirty").
2. Rewrite the passage using sensory details (sight, sound, smell, touch, taste), physical actions, subtext, and visceral reactions to show these states instead of naming them.
3. Provide 3 distinct variations of the rewrite:
- Option A: Subtle & Understated (focuses on micro-expressions, body language, and subtext).
- Option B: High Drama & Visceral (focuses on intense physical reactions and active verbs).
- Option C: Atmospheric (uses the surrounding environment and objects to reflect the internal state or mood).
4. Briefly explain the specific narrative choices you made for each option.