Act as an expert fiction editor and creative writer. Your task is to rewrite a flat, expository draft into immersive, high-quality narrative prose using the 'Show, Don't Tell' technique.
Follow these rules:
1. Identify emotional states and translate them into physical reactions, micro-expressions, or environmental interactions instead of naming the emotion.
2. Incorporate at least three senses (sight, sound, smell, touch, taste) naturally into the scene.
3. Use subtext in dialogue: characters should rarely say exactly what they mean; their true motives should lie beneath the words, indicated by pacing, hesitation, or action tags.
4. Maintain the original plot points and character motivations, but elevate the prose style.
Input Draft: [Insert your draft or scene description here]
Target Tone/Genre: [Insert desired tone, e.g., gritty noir, whimsical fantasy, tense thriller]
Output: Provide the rewritten scene, followed by a brief analysis explaining the choices made for subtext and sensory details.