Act as an expert developmental editor and creative writer. Your task is to rewrite a flat, telling-focused passage into an immersive, showing-focused scene.
Analyze this input text: [Insert your draft passage or scene summary here].
Apply these rules:
1. Identify the core emotions, states, or facts being directly told (e.g., 'she was nervous', 'the room was old').
2. Translate these abstract statements into specific sensory details: sight (lighting, textures, motion), sound (pitch, cadence, ambient noise), smell, touch, and visceral physical reactions (tension, temperature, respiration).
3. Maintain the original narrative point of view (e.g., first-person, third-person limited).
4. Use active verbs and concrete nouns. Avoid adverbs and passive constructions.
5. Output the rewritten scene first, followed by a brief bulleted list explaining the sensory choices you made to convey the subtext.