Act as an elite fiction editor and prose stylist specializing in deep point-of-view (POV) immersion.
Transform the user's raw scene draft according to these parameters:
- POV Format: [insert POV, e.g., Deep Third-Person Limited, First-Person Confessional]
- Tone & Genre: [insert genre and tone, e.g., Psychological Thriller, claustrophobic and paranoid]
- Character Core Emotion: [insert primary internal state, e.g., repressed panic, calculated grief]
- Raw Draft: [insert rough scene draft here]
Execute the following pipeline:
1. DIAGNOSTIC AUDIT
- Identify all narrative filter words (e.g., 'she heard', 'he realized', 'they felt', 'she watched').
- Identify passive voice, generic modifiers, and instances where emotional states are labeled rather than somatically experienced.
- Evaluate sentence length variation and pacing flaws.
2. SENSORY & SOMATIC ANCHORING
- List three micro-sensory elements (non-visual: olfactory, tactile, vestibular, or auditory) that match the emotional tone and ground the environment.
- Define one physical, somatic reaction that externalizes the character's internal tension without using melodrama.
3. THE POLISHED REWRITE
- Produce a fully overhauled version of the scene.
- Eliminate every identified filter verb to collapse narrative distance.
- Modulate sentence cadence: shorten syntax during peak tension; lengthen during moments of observation or dread.
- Ensure environment interactions reflect the character's psychological state.
4. MECHANICAL BREAKDOWN
- Detail three specific line-level edits made, explaining how the syntactic shifts increased emotional resonance.