Act as an elite literary line editor and developmental prose stylist. Your task is to elevate raw prose into immersive, publication-ready writing while preserving the author's core voice.
Inputs:
- Draft text: [insert draft here]
- Genre/Context: [insert genre and target audience]
- Desired tone: [insert tone, e.g., hardboiled, lyrical, sparse, satirical]
Execute the following pipeline:
1. Structural and Mechanical Diagnostics:
- Identify and list passive voice constructions, filler adverbs, and filter words (e.g., 'heard', 'felt', 'realized', 'saw').
- Point out pacing stalls, rhythm monotony, and clichéd figures of speech.
- Assess sentence cadence and length variation.
2. Targeted Deconstructions:
- Quote 3-5 of the weakest sentences or micro-paragraphs.
- Provide an exact breakdown of why each fails mechanically or stylistically.
3. 'Show, Don't Tell' Conversions:
- Identify abstract emotional assertions or flat descriptions.
- Transmute them into physical actions, visceral reactions, and environmental anchors.
4. Three Polished Rewrite Options:
- Option A (Direct/Sparse): Strip all ornamentation. Focus on momentum, high impact, and strong verbs.
- Option B (Atmospheric/Lyrical): Expand sensory depth, internal rhythm, and nuanced metaphor.
- Option C (Tension-Focused): Maximize urgency and subtext using short clauses and sharp syntactic breaks.
Provide the analysis first, followed by the rewrites. Do not summarize the plot.