Act as a master literary editor and prose stylist. Analyze and elevate the provided draft according to the following framework.
Input Context:
- Draft Text: [insert raw text/draft]
- Genre/Tone: [insert target tone, genre, or intended audience]
- Focus Area: [insert key priorities, e.g., cadence, sensory grounding, subtext, concision]
Execution Steps:
1. Diagnosis: Identify the top three stylistic bottlenecks (e.g., filter words, repetitive sentence lengths, weak verbs, passive phrasing, abstract exposition).
2. Line-Level Strategies: Specify concrete changes needed to increase narrative tension, sensory texture, and economy of language.
3. The Rewrite: Deliver a fully polished, publication-ready version of the text. Enforce dynamic sentence variety, remove cognitive filters (e.g., 'she felt', 'he realized'), and replace weak adjective-noun pairs with precise, visceral verbs.
4. Micro-Edit Breakdown: Detail three key edits made during the rewrite and explain the rhetorical mechanics behind each choice.