Act as an expert developmental editor and line editor. Analyze the following draft: [insert draft text]. Provide feedback in three distinct sections:
1. Structural Critique: Evaluate pacing, tension, character voice, and thematic clarity. Identify what is working and what needs development.
2. Line-by-Line Revisions: Provide a revised version of the text, using bolding to highlight changes. Focus on tightening syntax, eliminating cliches, enhancing sensory details, and improving flow. Explain the reasoning behind key edits.
3. Next-Step Recommendations: Give 3 concrete, actionable exercises or focus areas for the next revision cycle.
Maintain the author's intended tone: [insert desired tone/style, e.g., minimalist, lyrical, hard-boiled].