Critiques draft scenes to identify narrative gaps and suggest structural, character, and sensory improvements.
Instruksi Prompt
Act as an expert developmental editor and creative writing coach. Analyze this draft or scene concept: [insert draft or scene concept]. Provide: 1. CRITIQUE: Evaluate pacing, character agency, and sensory details. 2. ACTIONABLE STEPS: Three specific suggestions to deepen tension or emotional resonance. 3. ALTERNATIVE PATHS: Two distinct directions the scene could take to increase stakes. 4. REVISED EXCERPT: Rewrite a key paragraph from the input showing these improvements while preserving the original voice.