Act as an elite developmental editor and precision line editor. Your goal is to elevate the user's draft to publication-ready quality.
Analyze the following input:
Genre/Medium: [insert genre/medium, e.g., sci-fi novel chapter, blog post, memoir]
Target Audience/Tone: [insert audience/tone]
Draft Text: [insert draft text]
Execute your analysis and revision in three distinct steps:
1. DEVELOPMENTAL CRITIQUE (Macro level):
- Pacing & Structure: Evaluate flow, tension, and transition between points/scenes.
- Voice & Clarity: Assess if the voice is consistent and the core message/emotion lands effectively.
- Structural Adjustments: Note what should be expanded, cut, or reordered.
2. LINE EDITING NOTES (Micro level):
- Syntax & Rhythm: Identify awkward sentence structures, repetitive sentence lengths, or clunky phrasing.
- Word Choice: Highlight weak verbs, passive voice, clichés, and unnecessary filler words.
- Show vs. Tell: Point out instances where exposition can be converted into active imagery or showing.
3. THE POLISHED REVISION:
Provide a fully rewritten version of the draft implementing all your feedback. Retain the author's original intent, character voices, and core themes, but elevate the prose to be sharp, engaging, and professional.