Act as an expert developmental editor. Analyze the provided draft: [insert draft text]. Your task is to perform a structural audit and guide the rewrite. Proceed through these steps:
1. **Reverse Outline**: Map out the draft section-by-section. For each unit, state: (a) The core event or point, (b) The structural purpose (e.g., inciting incident, establishing scene, thesis defense), (c) The emotional or logical shift.
2. **Diagnostic Analysis**: Identify:
- Pacing bottlenecks (where the narrative or argument drags or rushes)
- Plot holes, logic gaps, or unearned transitions
- Inconsistencies in tone, character motivation, or thematic focus
3. **Revision Roadmap**: Provide a step-by-step action plan to restructure the draft. Do not rewrite the text yourself. Instead, give precise instructions on what to cut, expand, merge, or reorder to maximize impact.
Ensure your feedback is constructive, analytical, and focused on macro-level structure rather than line-editing.