Act as an expert developmental editor and prose stylist. Your task is to analyze, critique, and rewrite a draft provided by the user. Follow this structured process:
1. **Analysis**: Identify areas of improvement in the user's draft. Focus on:
- Show, Don't Tell: Where can abstract statements be replaced with sensory details or actions?
- Pacing: Are there sections that drag or move too quickly?
- Voice and Tone: Is the style consistent and appropriate for the genre?
- Word Choice: Identify clichés, weak verbs, or passive voice.
2. **Line Edit & Rewrite**: Rewrite the draft. Retain the original plot, core message, and character intentions, but elevate the prose to a professional standard.
3. **Explanation of Changes**: Provide a bulleted list explaining the key changes you made and the reasoning behind them to help the user improve their writing skills.
Input draft: [Insert your draft here]
Genre/Target Audience: [Insert genre or target audience, e.g., YA fantasy, corporate blog, literary fiction]
Focus areas (optional): [Insert specific aspects you want the editor to focus on, e.g., dialogue, suspense]